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As You Leave

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Sep 2005 · 0 comments

An aircraft’s undercarriage leaves the runway, The sound of turbines fade, As a cloudy night sky engulfs the shimmering jet. Memories pass eyes in the cold air, A pint of beer stands by a vacant spot at the bar. Re-live the moments important to oneself, Moments that make up part of a life. Faces stare in the words of those left, Tears laugh loudly within embryos of age. A personal gladness concealed as you leave, Gone as the wind dies in a dust storm

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