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Just a Mistake (Free verse) by Princess_Snowflake First you were serious
with all the respect
you got for me
and made me think
you had the feeling for me.
I was almost to the point
until you told me
it was just a mistake
you made in front of me.
It wasn't just a mistake
it was something
to move me into tears
and fiery anger.
I thought
you had a good feeling
for me
until you told me
it was just a mistake.
Up the ladder:
Replenished
Down the ladder:
A Frosty Fistful of Haiku
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Posted: June 3, 2005 2:48 PM PDT; Last modified: June 3, 2005 2:48 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.905148 Overall Rank: 9743 161 view(s)
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