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Love shall set you free (Free verse) by stacylynn_3
I am surrounded by walls,
no one can hear my desperate calls.
I scream with all my might,
but it remains silent in the lonely night
my eyes begin to tear,
but still no one can hear.
I am trapped, left without any hope,
so i sit, and begin to mope.
My aggravation leaves welts,
the depression never melts.
This is were i remain,
suffering in so much pain.
The only way to get out,
is if he comes about.
Only he can release me.
because love shall set you free.
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Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2005 12:21 PM PDT
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Watching a few good slasher movies could also improve on your poetic imagination. 'I scream with all my might', but the poem's tone is hardly more than a mumble.