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Blurry, All in a Flurry (Free verse) by darylchew
Resonate, levitate. Hang between these walls of regret and disappointment like sound so tame - Am I a shame? To quit this game and leave no one to pick up the pieces of a shattered hope. Satiate, exonerate. Satisfy this hunger of self-denial by striking myself off the list of the sinned - don't I get the gist? That everything started out cold. And then I blew the whistle.

Up the ladder: HELLO
Down the ladder: Alone

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11491
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2005 12:57 AM PDT
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