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Nothingness (Free verse) by beck2457
Hear me someone in my solitude Hear me scream for you to listen Hear me I fit nowhere Am I so different, they see through a cold screen? Benign white and black As it s in real What do I say to turn them cold? Do I say too much? Do I need too much? I suppose that’s their perception Yet I have walked alone all my life except for a brief time With an angel Who showed me what love is I hadn’t known love before her. And I didn’t know how to keep it. I am accomplished in my field, yet they don’t hear I’m accomplished in my studies, yet they don’t notice I’ve given all I can to this world I have nothing else to give Accept perhaps my love Yet know one hears it So many I have laid out my soul too I am always not enough or too much The balance that so many seem to have is far from my reach Want didn’t keep it away Will didn’t keep it away I’m not sure what did? Why didn’t anyone ever listen?

Up the ladder: The Joynt
Down the ladder: Listen

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9232
Posted: April 4, 2005 12:16 PM PDT; Last modified: April 4, 2005 12:16 PM PDT
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[7] zodiac @ 212.118.19.212 | 6-Apr-05/3:45 AM | Reply
It wasn't very interesting, except to you.
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