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Free verse № 121912

the perfect cast

Member since 2004 · Posted 16 Mar 2005 · 0 comments

i cast that pretty smile out on the lake i told the fish its all about the bait i sat and i waited, a quarter too two. a pull on the line! what a surpise! get ready....reel it in slow. oh crap! just a boot.

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