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the perfect cast (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
i cast that pretty smile out on the lake i told the fish its all about the bait i sat and i waited, a quarter too two. a pull on the line! what a surpise! get ready....reel it in slow. oh crap! just a boot.

Up the ladder: By My Window
Down the ladder: nothing left

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12371
Posted: March 16, 2005 7:30 PM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2005 7:30 PM PST
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