poemranker ::For being shaken out of Bad Thoughts. by fevriere

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Free verse № 117900

For being shaken out of Bad Thoughts.

Member since 2004 · Posted 5 Jan 2005 · 1 comment

Orange decibels, the response of western sky to death. With unerring frequency, the sky is sure of death. The race of the rhythm of day, the sudden sputtering, ideal-coloured sky.. We trust that hot intensity of death: what is there else? .. Until stars.

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[9] Dovina 6-Jan-05/7:52 AM Reply
A fine comparison if you can know about afterlife (stars). The clockwork nature of sunsets (death) seems and the certainty of night seems stretched. Still a good poem.