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patricide (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
Some say there's life to be outlived,
I say why die?
and when my body falls to the bottom,
will there be singing?
The wake was fully upscale and oddly trying,
the sad faces, with such dim grace, sought death and dying
Some say there's death to be remade
blood colored choices, broken face,
and when your hatred falls from grace,
will we see night?
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.8577223
Overall Rank: 10386
Posted: December 24, 2004 11:12 PM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2004 11:12 PM PST
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