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Common (Free verse) by SoulSlippedAway
Patience overcomes this rotting corpse
Bolted eyes stuck to the floor
It seems we have alot in common
Clashing thunder clouds swirl around you
Making you a goddess of hurt
Places of deserted halls and royal dust
Is all you stand before
Dancing moonlight touches your tears
Forming a neverending cycle
It seems we have alot in common
Until I slip through your arms
Tempting to fall and never stop
We have alot in common
Careless eyes stuck in a hurtful past
Arms filled with scars and lies
No blood wasted now
Tackles your body down hard
You feel nothing though
And life passes you by slowly
We have so much in common
People disappeared
And you will always be alone
We never had so much in common
Wanting to die and end this pain
But you can't and you never will
You say you must be a vampire
Because light hurts your skin
Only you could never fly
You just fell...like me
We have so much yet nothing in common
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I write what I want,although it seems you don't like it.I guess I'll
just leave this site then.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.75
Weighted score: 4.7317934
Overall Rank: 11745
Posted: August 27, 2002 7:28 PM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2002 7:29 PM PDT
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