poemranker ::Common by SoulSlippedAway

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Common

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Aug 2002 · 0 comments

Patience overcomes this rotting corpse Bolted eyes stuck to the floor It seems we have alot in common Clashing thunder clouds swirl around you Making you a goddess of hurt Places of deserted halls and royal dust Is all you stand before Dancing moonlight touches your tears Forming a neverending cycle It seems we have alot in common Until I slip through your arms Tempting to fall and never stop We have alot in common Careless eyes stuck in a hurtful past Arms filled with scars and lies No blood wasted now Tackles your body down hard You feel nothing though And life passes you by slowly We have so much in common People disappeared And you will always be alone We never had so much in common Wanting to die and end this pain But you can't and you never will You say you must be a vampire Because light hurts your skin Only you could never fly You just fell...like me We have so much yet nothing in common ---------------------------------------- I write what I want,although it seems you don't like it.I guess I'll just leave this site then.

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