poemranker ::Jasmime by Lee Ho Chan

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Jasmime

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Nov 2004 · 1 comment

I win money at casino So I decide to see girl. I want Oriental So I decide Jasmine. I see Jasmine one year ago; She good. I try many girl after her And I decide to see Jasmine again. In one year she change; She change her hair now red. One year ago she good; But she change. She not like her job anymore And her face show it. Her pussy very loose: I feel nothing. I want to put in ass; She not let me. She not like finger inside pussy; She not like sex. So I think why come see girl not like sex? She kiss but I can tell she not like to. Picture of baby in room. I think baby hers - That why pussy so loose. I not feel good fucking her - I feel nothing - Especially if she is mother. If you want tight pussy And Oriental girls There are many place for this. I like Lucy: she tight and like sex. But Jasmine still good looking.

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[9] Dovina 28-Nov-04/10:37 AM Reply
Very real-sounding Chinese English voice. Too many redundant lines. Funny.