poemranker ::Confusion by Meler1123

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Confusion

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Nov 2004 · 0 comments

My heart, pulsating through my ear Eyes heavier than the dump truck that just ran over me Energyless aggression seeping through ever pore Question marks inflating my brain like a hot air balloon

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