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Confusion (Free verse) by Meler1123
My heart, pulsating through my ear Eyes heavier than the dump truck that just ran over me Energyless aggression seeping through ever pore Question marks inflating my brain like a hot air balloon

Up the ladder: Life
Down the ladder: Mirror Mirror

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8130
Posted: November 8, 2004 9:50 PM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2004 9:50 PM PST
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