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Sunrise (Haiku) by Aetius
This morning's sunrise Brought us color but no warmth. Blue paint on canvas.
Up the ladder: II
Down the ladder: Broken for Completion
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5915
Posted: November 5, 2004 4:30 PM PST; Last modified: November 5, 2004 4:30 PM PST
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[9] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 5-Nov-04/4:47 PM | Reply
A nice comparison. It feels right.
[9] tadpole @ 67.21.31.89 | 6-Nov-04/10:25 PM | Reply
It's almost like I'm there
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