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after dinner (Free verse) by oneglove
satan
conjurer of lies
how firm is your grasp
you blind a nation
disease
you infest the eyes
nothing is beautiful
nothing is good enough
a nation full of girls
face down on bathroom stalls
curled tight on cold tile
crying out for love
you force them to be perfect
though they already are
it doesnt stop
nothing satisfies
teeth yellow
smiles fade
the fire dims
the body whitles away
you strike down the strongest servent
and watch others fall in line
you laugh as their body weakens
you rejoice as they slowly die
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7813
Posted: November 1, 2004 6:58 PM PST; Last modified: November 1, 2004 6:58 PM PST
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