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the gold rush (Free verse) by oneglove
the saphire sun hangs low in the sky
it paints my back in brilliant hues
aptly placed objects cast dark shadows
in somber mourning of my heart
the sun explodes in my rearview
reminding me of the light i've left behind
i flip the mirror to impede my pain
it's too late, she's already on my mind
opposing traffic flys swiftly westward
shimmering in the setting sun
crowded boom towns await their arrival
but the riches have already been won
though forty-niners search in vain
for the few small veins of gold
nestled in the land of lincoln
i've struck far more precious goods
i'll be back for you my treasure
carried swiftly on the amber sea
a priceless diamond nestled amongst coal
and yet you wait for me
some pan for a lifetime
but i'm already rich
just an average guy who got lucky
along those long wagon trains out west
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Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3151
Posted: October 14, 2004 8:15 AM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2004 8:15 AM PDT
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