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For her. (Pimple) by darylchew
Invading my sleepless nights, my dreams. Seeping into every crevice of my soul, You fill me up, yet I feel so empty. Locked doors to the past, You hold the key tightly in your hand. I will never know. Marble statues; of Love, Hate and Despair. (Like the Devil himself, you burn me up. From inside.) Fallen angel, when shall you take me away?

Up the ladder: Until I see you again
Down the ladder: Depression

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.1986713
Overall Rank: 4570
Posted: September 1, 2004 10:00 AM PDT; Last modified: September 1, 2004 10:00 AM PDT
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