poemranker ::Laughing by gregg333

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Laughing

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Aug 2004 · 0 comments

We were in bed together Laughing in the natal dawn Painting our lives on the ceiling This leaping and frolicking of our souls Had drawn me to you The bond an arc weld The blinders removed from my eyes If making me happy is sunlight You are a spiral galaxy

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