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Laughing (Free verse) by gregg333
We were in bed together
Laughing in the natal dawn
Painting our lives on the ceiling
This leaping and frolicking of our souls
Had drawn me to you
The bond an arc weld
The blinders removed from my eyes
If making me happy is sunlight
You are a spiral galaxy
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7936
Posted: August 27, 2004 11:49 PM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2004 11:49 PM PDT
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