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Laughing (Free verse) by gregg333
We were in bed together Laughing in the natal dawn Painting our lives on the ceiling This leaping and frolicking of our souls Had drawn me to you The bond an arc weld The blinders removed from my eyes If making me happy is sunlight You are a spiral galaxy

Up the ladder: Broken
Down the ladder: Dirty Heaven

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7904
Posted: August 27, 2004 11:49 PM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2004 11:49 PM PDT
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