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Hold and hold me hold tight (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
Hold and hold me hold tight Until this passing pass passes And melts quick and quickening Into spring flowering and Exploring every nook and Corner until finding it finds That shiver that rolls and Rolling rolls and rolls into Shakes that bounce Again and shakes again and Shakes that bounce Again and shakes again and Hold and hold me hold tight. Winter is a repeating desert, Blind me, blinding light.

Down the ladder: Bound

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5125
Posted: August 25, 2004 3:10 PM PDT; Last modified: August 25, 2004 3:10 PM PDT
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[9] nentwined @ 66.92.28.14 | 27-Aug-04/10:55 AM | Reply
this is pretty cool. I was a bit worried by the gimmick early on, but... it flows nicely; definitely captures something and shares it. :)
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