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Sudden continuations - Cracked. (title suggestions wanted.) (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
And it was extended unto me,
the assumption, a cracked junction,
of some thought meant to detail
a bodies pale deaf, processed, muted emotion...
Offended, cheated, I roared in silence,
kept the suspense and sealed the jagged crevices
with angst for epoxy, and proceeded to
unzip the sky and let the joint die.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9258
Posted: August 19, 2004 6:29 PM PDT; Last modified: August 19, 2004 6:29 PM PDT
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