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Tonight (Free verse) by jessicazee The nice furry cat
Did not understand
The rules pertaining to
The beautiful truth
This does not
Adhere to the straight
Forward ideals
Written out in the newspaper
Of the small unimportant town
Where you grew up
Even though you and I
Seem to have come to some sort
Of understanding
It does not matter
In our warm tent,
Silent to the neighbors
Away from the street noise
Close to the rest
Up the ladder:
New commandments
Down the ladder:
blobby blob blob
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Posted: July 28, 2004 12:03 AM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2004 12:03 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.642391 Overall Rank: 12314 Comments:
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EAger to Offend @ 65.95.241.26
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12-Dec-04/3:28 AM
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Wow! I can't understand the low scores on this one. Even when your writing is a little unhinged I find you establish a feeling. Maybe it's just because I'm a nature nut.
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