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Hands (Free verse) by crumu
He stood at the window
And the moon started crumbling.
Like a forgotten corner,
He did not like light.
He was too dusty
With age,
Too sleepy.
He lingered near his old sky
And slowly turned
Into dreams.
In his shaky slumber
He shed all the waters of his earth,
He wept.
At his lonesome window,
A hand let go of another.
A hand reached out
Into the crumbling stars.
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Weighted score: 4.7865834
Overall Rank: 11269
Posted: July 24, 2004 11:19 AM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2004 11:19 AM PDT
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