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Hands (Free verse) by crumu
He stood at the window And the moon started crumbling. Like a forgotten corner, He did not like light. He was too dusty With age, Too sleepy. He lingered near his old sky And slowly turned Into dreams. In his shaky slumber He shed all the waters of his earth, He wept. At his lonesome window, A hand let go of another. A hand reached out Into the crumbling stars.

Up the ladder: Mummy
Down the ladder: Ramblings of a Clerk

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.5
Weighted score: 4.7865834
Overall Rank: 11275
Posted: July 24, 2004 11:19 AM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2004 11:19 AM PDT
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