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for June (the boy not the month)/Beatrice Poon (Free verse) by New Life Drug
I like you and you like me if you're not gonna do anything about it I can't go through like this getting hurt again and it kills me every time i'm doubted but I swear I love you haven't I made it clear? Do I have to go Ron Burgandy on you and shout from a mountain top that I don't have? All I want is to fall asleep with you we hear each other's songs on the radio you said if someone's stuck in your head and won't get out then it's meant to be I told you I agreed because that was me but don't you see you're in mine too? BEATRICE RULES! Beatrice, oh Beatrice Poon I can't wait to meet you I can't wait to see you in the halls and make fun of you just like the others will do I'm sure of it Oh Beatrice, Beatrice Poon I hope you do good in P.E. and I hope you're not afraid to change your clothes or pee Oh Beatrice I hope you don't get stuck with Palmisano, oh no Because that would be the worst Beatrice, oh Beatrice I wonder what your parents were thinking when they named you I wonder if you look out of your window and wish that you could change your name Yes it's Beatrice Beatrice Poon

Up the ladder: Leftout
Down the ladder: Honesty

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8448
Posted: July 9, 2004 11:48 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2004 11:56 PM PDT
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[7] edpeterson @ 68.79.1.86 | 11-Jul-04/6:10 AM | Reply
cut off the first half
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