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Hendrix (Free verse) by DrThorsen
Casual glances upon distant fences
The warming glow and power of resonant Truth
modern insecurity
Never go broke I got property
Pacing prey
all the integrity of a cat's curled tail
Storming another day, lost among my breed
Two cents and not another deed
drifting of mutuality
Motion appeases insecurity
Each action, an appeal to insanity
Casually drift to peer without perception
No panacea like progress
Imagined or projected
A half moon in a harrowing sky
Drives me to despise "why?"
Each step a metaphor of beating our self and spirit
Forgive me Maker for I can't imagine the world without me
Another Samurai lost in preparation for never-coming battle
The fuzzy comfort of the first world luring me into casual death
Coaxing me out of love with friction
Hypnosis for the day I don't wake
Recognize every beat
The thinnest thread will lead
Tribal pounding
Rejuvenating
the next beat
the next idea
the next messiah
the next day
will do
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9543
Posted: August 22, 2002 1:09 PM PDT; Last modified: August 22, 2002 1:09 PM PDT
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