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South Shore (Free verse) by Rodavlas
Here, I've sank a hundred fathoms
into a sea of sorrow.
A solid darkness is abound around my eyes.
Beneath the tide along the undertow
the sandbar catches me, there goes my soul.
Bellowing below, you hear me
In comes your hands reaching.
Saving my soul, you took your time
to pick me up from this down inside.
You shared your heart, now it's welded on mine.
You brought me to the light, out of the depths of my
own salted eyes.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5769
Posted: June 29, 2004 9:32 PM PDT; Last modified: June 29, 2004 9:32 PM PDT
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