Poemranker [Poem: The Death of Love] [by donmiguel1960] Thu Nov 21 20:50:31 PST 2024

It destroys me to love you The misery seems to be infinite Why is this essential? With permission, may I please just not care? Granted the permission I could not stop Why am I forced to love you? How is this possible? I know I do because you hurt me so much I donât think I like you I hate who I am when Iâm with you You are better without me But Iâm in love with you Unable to make sense No logic to this cause No lesson can be brought forth And I canât picture breathing without you

[7] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 28-Jun-04/5:25 PM | Reply

really aught to reword that "whom" line, even if it is correct it is awkward in this context, imho.

Not crazy about breathing devoid, either - sorry.

[n/a] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 > Shuushin | 28-Jun-04/5:26 PM | Reply

How is he supposed to take your suggestion seriously when you've used the archaism 'aught' instead of the correct word, 'ought'?

[7] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 > zodiac | 28-Jun-04/5:55 PM | Reply

I don't know Zodiac, how?

You and your riddles.

[n/a] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 > Shuushin | 29-Jun-04/9:55 PM | Reply

By being a colossal boob.

Checkmate. Cast down ye cutlasses and avast.

[7] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.52 > zodiac | 30-Jun-04/5:02 AM | Reply

feels more like I'm being boarded by the parrot...

Here - have a cracker, cracker.

[n/a] donmiguel1960 @ 68.96.168.211 > Shuushin | 28-Jun-04/9:47 PM | Reply

I like your suggestion, i'm changing it