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elegy (Free verse) by herbgirlofbirkenau
Soft spoken raindrops
coated your lies in silver
farewell to the days
of innocence...
Your words
your lies
my betrayal stonecast
a grave to bury my love in
for you I will long no more
It's cloudy on a Wednesday
I've been lying here for hours
cursing you and hexing you
a voodoo doll devoured.
amidst the ivory obession towers
a new born hate is screaming
blood red body exposed
and it will grow I know
until is cancels all the tears.
Revelation came
revolution left
naivete stays-
It's burrowed in my chest.
Farewell to the days of innocence
by your grave I'm weeping
A newborn infant blanketed in hate
inside my mind is sleeping.
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Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7136
Posted: June 6, 2004 1:30 PM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2004 1:30 PM PDT
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