poemranker ::elegy by herbgirlofbirkenau

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elegy

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Jun 2004 · 0 comments

Soft spoken raindrops coated your lies in silver farewell to the days of innocence... Your words your lies my betrayal stonecast a grave to bury my love in for you I will long no more It's cloudy on a Wednesday I've been lying here for hours cursing you and hexing you a voodoo doll devoured. amidst the ivory obession towers a new born hate is screaming blood red body exposed and it will grow I know until is cancels all the tears. Revelation came revolution left naivete stays- It's burrowed in my chest. Farewell to the days of innocence by your grave I'm weeping A newborn infant blanketed in hate inside my mind is sleeping.

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