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Time (Free verse) by PoeticDelicacy
It's Been eons
but wounds heal slow
when you're dwelling
in the garden of pain
and rose thorns
keep tearing
at cuts and scrapes
that hurt more than memories
of a shit load of shit
It's been a while
since knives cut
but blood still flows
and pain still ebbs
at night
alone and cold
with no loving hugs
or 'It's alright...
I promise'
But They always break them
and can't keep anything
Its been a long time
since I slept
soundly
in the embrace of night
without staring
at cold ceilings
and thinking about
things that dont matter anymore..
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Weighted score: 4.7913947
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Posted: August 20, 2002 10:54 PM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2002 10:54 PM PDT
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