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Away (Free verse) by PoeticDelicacy
I runaway and no one cares how far I run or where I fall away and they don't care how far I fall and they're Too occupied with their fine lives their perfect selves can't be Bothered with flaws and faults that surround all Of me I tried to scream But couldn't breathe This last time I will say I'm tired of pretend love Tired of all the fake I runaway please try to care I need you all today I fallaway and I'm real scared hold me til I melt away

Up the ladder: I Samuel 26
Down the ladder: A missing puzzle piece

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10085
Posted: August 20, 2002 8:25 PM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2002 8:25 PM PDT
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