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Free verse № 10245

Away

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Aug 2002 · 0 comments

I runaway and no one cares how far I run or where I fall away and they don't care how far I fall and they're Too occupied with their fine lives their perfect selves can't be Bothered with flaws and faults that surround all Of me I tried to scream But couldn't breathe This last time I will say I'm tired of pretend love Tired of all the fake I runaway please try to care I need you all today I fallaway and I'm real scared hold me til I melt away

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