on The Dead Sea by philn
24 Apr 2004, 6:27 PM
I wasn't really sure how to end it, so that's why the third stanza doesn't really work right now. I wanted to see what people thought before I spent the time finishing it off and changing the ending.
on Mixtapes (or We Always End Where We Began) by philn
7 Apr 2005, 2:47 PM
I actually was deliberately trying to make that stanza sound somewhat bad. Each stanza is suppose to be a part of the mix tape and/or a commentary. That was supposed to be representative of the "hackneyed ballads" that are honest, but somewhat pathetic. I probably could have made that clearer.