A: Yes, the wording is unattractive and doesn't even seem like proper english, but it's very important to me to state it as a way of life.
2: I honestly didn't notice the repitition of that. Man, that bites grandmas.
Orange: It's very important to capitalize the "religiousish" words, because that's what especially has to be taken note of.
Tony Danza: I didn't notice the "murmer" thing either. Thanks.
Finally: It's actually not as overstated as you think. You just have to know what this is truly about. The two main stanzas are about entirely separate things, and they explore (perhaps in a nearly sermonic fashion) the important aspects which must be placed together to give the full picture. I highly doubt that anyone cares so much (nobody could be so bored), but I could explain it line by line if requested. Only the last stanza is truly repetitive.
There are views expressed in this piece that, although they may be clumsily conveyed, number too greatly to put into eight lines.
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