on The Businessman by abcmonkey78
12 Jun 2004, 11:13 AM
To set the stage for this, I wrote this for school. We have to write a series of prologues, as there was in the book Canterbury Tales by Geoffry Chaucer. The idea is that 4 people are moving over to Amsterdam. So, as they arrive onboard their plane, the flight attendant describes each person in turn.
replying on The Unknown Soldier by abcmonkey78
12 Jun 2004, 10:57 AM
Maybe this for that line?
"And all the more I contemplate it, fear disgruntles death."
And possibly this to replace the "navy" like ending, which I understand could be awkward.
"For my generation's limb shall be the one torn off the tree."
And finally, yes, I have very little education as to where semicolons should be placed. So if you raise an eyebrow to any, it's got a high possibility of being misplaced.
"And all the more I contemplate it, fear disgruntles death."
And possibly this to replace the "navy" like ending, which I understand could be awkward.
"For my generation's limb shall be the one torn off the tree."
And finally, yes, I have very little education as to where semicolons should be placed. So if you raise an eyebrow to any, it's got a high possibility of being misplaced.
replying on Roses by abcmonkey78
8 Jun 2004, 10:25 PM
i dunno what "iambic" or "trochaic" mean, although i would like to know... I just wrote this just following equal syllables and stanzas in each peice. :\