regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-02/11:00 AM
My suggestion is to quit watching bad teen movies. Or considering your youth they may still hold attraction. But in this case you are write. This is a series of 100 haikus and the second one seems out of context. It is in a series that would be considered more cliche, because don't we just love those things. So I popped it off.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-02/11:18 AM
I always want you around lemonade. Because we need such insight and I do not think Ms. Winterson would much care to join this site. Besides, GW needs a bit of honest critique from the feminine side because we boys are still hung up on the cupped breasts in the 1000 language poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-02/11:23 AM
reproachful trembling emaciated, corpselike merciless....But yes, too many nouns TOO. Don't get mad.
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	4-Sep-02/12:03 PM
Wow, where did this come from? I though this discussion was over. We now know the Bacchus scandal. And we know god,alex/ben are one, but you are a mystery. I though beakism was you. He/she logged in last night. And what about the other -=l33k=- character with the same wings, who was that. I cannot keep up with this soap opera.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-02/12:19 PM
well why not: gutta cavat lapidem, non vi, sed saepe cadendo. Becasue she is.........
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	4-Sep-02/2:22 PM
Either I hang out in the wrong pubs, or quit going to clubs long ago but I guess I don't see all that many goth folks so I am not sure what sort of definition they would have today. When I was a wee lad, they listened to the cure, wore eyeliner, spiky hair (you know, hey my adolescence was in the 80s) and bemoaned the world against them. Still hold true in 2002?
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-02/3:25 PM
hahahahah I knew this was you DA. Only you in disguise could make such a moronic comment. hahahah cliche. hahaha trite. But if this isn't DA and actually some freaking unversed idiot out there -- prose hahah line breaks hahah tell me ha ha how do you vote on your own poems. i want to know that trick because you people are failing to recognize my genius. moron hahah.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-02/3:31 PM
hahahah and here is true poetic genius. hahahaha
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-02/11:00 PM
Oh god, it is the same spiel. Are you sure you are not one of the same, like minds and all that crap..."ooh I cannot write worth a shite, but I do possess superior knowledge when it comes to poetry and therefore I can be the ultimate judge of what is "great" and what is not." Your comment regarding the other poem showed you really are the cad, because frankly you don't you what the hell you are talking about. And you sound like an idiot in the meantime. But whatever. You and DA can have your little "oh we are so cool and goth and highly skilled in the art of esoteric nonsense clique."
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-02/11:10 PM
But you jabber just as much, eh?
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-02/8:32 AM
Oh yes, and that is just what we want our standards to be measured against: Bryon. A Romantic poet. Let's see, I believe we have passed through numerous "isms" since then and styles have evolved so you are right, we do not have any Bryon's here: thank god's wife. we do have people making pathic attempts to imitate the style and failing miserably, but we will leave those people out of this talk. In addition, if you measure everything on this site with such archaic standards, no wonder you spout the things you do. Read more poetry; evolve.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-02/8:41 AM
My problem (and it is not really a problem) was with beaker's (or your) initial comment to introduce himself more formally to this lovely gathering. And I believe that is the first time I mentioned clique unless you are referring to my wanting to know what a goth sort was in these millennium days.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-02/8:43 AM
I believe I meant Byron there, pardon the dyslexic moment.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-02/8:45 AM
Nice? We are not nice; we are just driven by other motives half of the time.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-02/9:27 AM
No, I just think some men really understand who is running the show and why. How about "Patterns of Migration."
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-02/9:43 AM
Seriously DA I do not have a problem with you, I don't have a problem with anyone here (well except razorgirl sometimes and her idiotic statements). I comment the same on your comments as I do everyone else. You are treated equally in my book. If you want me to have a problem, I could make one up. I do like you in the form of DA though, rather than the beaker. That side of your brain is much more dull than the other. And how does the chat think work? You seem schooled on these things.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-02/9:46 AM
Every bird and their brother Leon migrate here. We have seasons. As far as the other, it is a much more intricate subject than just procreation. But it is all my own theory. John Gray is way off base.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-02/9:50 AM
What is it with you people and prosaic poems? Do you not read anything contemporary? And gee, let's give this a 5 because it shoots right over the head and is dense. Babbit why don't you write something lighter for timmy boy to understand. And make it rhyme.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-02/10:12 AM
Me too, christof. It is not just you.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-02/10:18 AM
birthday letters (the newest) is a good overview. plus he finally comes clean (in a way) on the plath struggles.