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31-Jan-04/1:57 PM |
Particularly like... stock-broke potentate mummy bereft of organelles or tissue. Very stark.
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31-Jan-04/2:03 PM |
Just noticed how many times you have zeroed me and left no comment as to why. Returning the favor.
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1-Feb-04/10:15 AM |
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1-Feb-04/1:44 PM |
Yes Critter. Yer showing talent!
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1-Feb-04/1:47 PM |
Poor Critter! Your insults are still CRIPPLED! But, your love for me is touching none-the-less. Thank you. I feel BLESSED.
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2-Feb-04/12:05 AM |
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2-Feb-04/7:51 AM |
You can always end it now and save yourself years of disappointment. Not that I am suggesting anything.
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2-Feb-04/10:02 AM |
Does not show hate. Merely desire of possession.
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2-Feb-04/11:26 AM |
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2-Feb-04/11:29 AM |
Almost like behind closed doors. Is this the aftermath?
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3-Feb-04/9:40 AM |
Nice light piece. Fluff but still....
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3-Feb-04/9:55 AM |
The second stanza is great. Hell on reflection, the whole thing is great.
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3-Feb-04/2:30 PM |
Sweet Sentiment, but if falls short of being well put.
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3-Feb-04/4:32 PM |
A bit insipid. Uninspired.
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3-Feb-04/4:33 PM |
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3-Feb-04/6:52 PM |
Dreams of cakes and whatever they feast,
This line makes me stumble, probably because I don't see what it means. That being said, I was able to sing this in the traditional manner I sung my son to sleep. Very Good!
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3-Feb-04/6:56 PM |
Written with just the right amount of presumed barefoot ignorance. Good Show!
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