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10-Jul-03/5:15 PM |
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I've seen more grammatical correctness from a chimp on crack. If Shakespeare was written by monkeys with a typewriter, then this was likely a mule's fart that knocked over an ink well.
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10-Jul-03/5:37 PM |
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0o0o0o0o0o0o Spookey guy. I'm so scared. At least most of this one made sense though. I'll give you a 4 for the effort.
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| Re: Wanksta by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
11-Jul-03/9:38 AM |
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It was much better before you changed the spellings.
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| Re: I sat for an hour to watch a spider by Jimbo |
29-Jul-03/9:00 PM |
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I like it but I think the metaphor at the end is just too blantent. Try being a little more subtle. 6
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| Re: Tailor Made by OnTheOtherHand |
3-Oct-03/6:07 PM |
Dear DA,
Thank you for the ten but your comment isn't welcome here. I've played the post, delete, repost, redelete game with you before. Let's not do it again.
Love,
OFA
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| Re: The first Poeme by Everyone by Everyone |
17-Oct-03/2:43 AM |
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| Re: You must enter a title for your poem about lebsians! by OnTheOtherHand |
18-Oct-03/2:45 AM |
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| Re: Torment by ThoughtfulSoul |
18-Oct-03/3:28 AM |
Turn your torment to a torrent and cry me a river
With such a power title you promised what you failed to deliver
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| Re: Family by ramtheman1 |
18-Oct-03/3:34 AM |
What? Where do you live? Families are fariy tales lady.
Ok it's not really that bad but you're sugar coating makes me gag. Really now some families are like that but some are like the ones where the neigbor kid comes over to make sure the kid gets fed because the parents are too strung out to do it themselves and then the parents make the neighbor kid do things a nine year old shouldn't even know about. Others are like the one where the kid goes off to college and the parents move and don't bother telling the kid. Then you have the ones were the dad is long gone, the mother is just barely done giving birth and the baby is in a dumpster.
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18-Oct-03/3:43 AM |
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A poem about people does nothing but a pile of mud is percious enough to be compared to rape?
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