Re: Jericho by goldfish	9-Jul-02/10:44 AM
Some part struggle a bit, others are just brilliant. The marble and rose thing particularly very nice. Thanks
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jul-02/10:45 PM
Funny and some really good parts. Ending particularly is weak though. Beginning is kind of jumpstarted. I like 2nd verse best.
Re: If When We Die by lynnkyle	13-Feb-04/3:16 PM
It's a lovely sentiment. I like the writing of the first part better than the second part. Finally, I can't avoid the logical bump that you are wishing the person you speak of dead before you though. ;-) Which just leaves me with this crystalization... I love you and I want you dead. ;-) No offense I hope. I really enjoy so much of it.
Re: Rant by blkarak	14-Feb-04/5:59 AM
It's very good I think. Very good. Poems like this are a bit dense for my personal taste. I mean for reading. When I do read it, I picture it more as a spoken piece. I think it would be great for that.