| Re: Jericho by goldfish |
9-Jul-02/5:44 PM |
What no Joshua, no Aaron, no trumpets! maybe Sodom and Gamora would have been a better subject.
Nice spacing though??
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| Re: Where are you Eric? by Eric Johnson |
9-Jul-02/3:03 PM |
Ther are no amount of words imaginable to describe this poem. A nucleur missile, arsenic and a desserted island might be the only cures left for you to cleanse the residue from your mind if you read this pointless self indulgent abomination. Eric here is some advice read more write less and don't use the word soul more then ten times in any piece of writing.
Subscribe to poets and writers magazine as soon as possible and join the Iowa workshop and pray for redemption. William burroughs is currently crawling out of his grave to find you and forbid you from ever picking up A PEN AGAIN. STICK TO COMPUTERS. PLEASE.o
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| Re: I'll Miss You by Eric Johnson |
9-Jul-02/2:09 PM |
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Jesus Christ lose the commas, and buy a theasaurus, or atleast read a little Arthur Rimbaud.
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