regarding some deleted poem...	4-Jan-03/4:31 PM
I think that it is a brill poem. Gets right down the nitty gritty. It makes a statement though, I like. I'm sure many would disagree with me here. I guess its just your style. I like poems that show the "real" world so to speak. Hard to explain that. Very good though, i give it a 9! :) Jax xx