regarding some deleted poem...	20-Dec-02/8:29 AM
Very good imagery, a powerful poem, I don't like "cerulean" it sounds a bit hackneyed, and "good to the last drop" doesn't seem to fit, but I like it a lot.
Re: Comfort Food by jessicazee	20-Dec-02/8:52 AM
an interesting poem, the mixture of the two sets of imagery is repellant, brings to mind eating disorders, perhaps that was the intention of the poet, no matter a poem takes on a life of its own once it is born. Smooth blending of imagery, I don't know what to make of the, hmm, old world nature of the foods mentioned...