Re: The Dawn Of Darkness by Dariana	6-Oct-02/9:40 PM
Thanks for your comments. Ummm I hope if I make a couple of suggestions you won't be offended (I fully admit I know nothing about poetry) But if you changed the line ending "horror first began" to "horror did begin" you get a closer match in rhyme. Also the last line should end in the word 'sin' ... something about the night bringing sin maybe Just a couple of thoughts ( :
Re: Truths by Nicholas Jones	6-Oct-02/9:26 PM
Ryn: No I'm not Darren Day, whoever that fellow might be. Champagne socialists have always been rather laughable, on both sides of the fence. / :
Re: Human self pity by Service	6-Oct-02/9:07 PM
I understand what you are saying. I dig trenches, you find comfort and seek the innocence in memorys from your past. Both of us avoiding the reality of the present. I can relate.