regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-02/10:08 PM
I have them too, but in the dry heat of Ninevah, summer.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-02/10:27 PM
So, 1. boy has new girl 2. boy feels sorry for himself because of old girl, and gets drunk, passing out on new girl 3. girl realize boy prefers bottle to relationship and leaves...? Yes? That would make Paris even colder.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-02/10:30 PM
I see it. I agree with the other commenters. It could be better, with more incubation.
Re: The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit	25-Sep-02/10:31 PM
Made me smile with this one. Thank you.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-02/10:33 PM
Pretty damn moving for a first draft. Are you going to finish it, or lock it away with the tarnished silver?
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-02/10:36 PM
I have regrets like this as well, friend. A postcard of your life, posted here, this is.