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11-Oct-06/5:38 AM |
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Nice write, if you publish this perhaps look at making any line ends strong - there are couples of the low ends which disturbed the rate/rhythm for me.
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| Re: Cassius by helenwales |
11-Oct-06/6:05 AM |
You know what it is to have a bite of pussycat in your bedridden-nudity alleged Helen of Wales?
A pussycat in the bed makes for a poem, but not of âpotentialâ. It is a DANGER. Material NOT "potential".
See to them my scars? Look at my scars!
Try stronger. Je te donne des SIX.
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