Re: a comment on My Prayer by dana071287	12-May-06/12:27 PM
hey, thanks for the comments. I'll take a look and maybe work on some of the rhymes that I have in the poem. I'd also just like to point out that with the poem, I was also counting syllables, every line has 7, so that was a point of struggle I had in writing the poem. But thanks again for your criticism...much appreciated