poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Owner of the Sky (21-40)

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on some deleted poem 9 May 2002, 11:44 PM
Thanks. How I write is how I speak... so wouldn't losing the slang in my poetry be NOT me?

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Well........ this generally needs work. The first line is good. And then it falls apart. Lose the vernacular phrases "takes the cake"...
on Alchemy by Anemone 11 May 2002, 2:53 AM
The sadness is evident, I think it kinda depressed me a little. :o)