regarding some deleted poem...	9-May-02/11:44 PM
Thanks. How I write is how I speak... so wouldn't losing the slang in my poetry be NOT me? responding to: ------------- Well........ this generally needs work. The first line is good. And then it falls apart. Lose the vernacular phrases "takes the cake"...
Re: Alchemy by Anemone	11-May-02/2:53 AM
The sadness is evident, I think it kinda depressed me a little. :o)