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deviant conveniences (Free verse) by J.B. Manning

We had unprotected sex Knowing you’re infected Your cum-fungus blistered my flesh On contact Memories of you resonate in my mind Like water on windows Certainty fades like Daylight and looking back is easy…fore-site blinding Love is addictive and I’m broken I want to Tie your pubic hair in knots and hang you on your contemplation Every time You say goodbye.

Joe-joe 2-May-04/9:09 AM
Zodie,

I know it's difficult for you to put 2 and 2 together but I'll try:

Quote from Dark Angel: "You seem determined to hold a theory which is demonstrably buncombe because it poses a "deeper challenge". You think that artificially imposing a grand cosmic structure on your life is a worthwhile thing to do". Interpretation: Darky says that my "theory" is concocted for the sake of a challenge that I seek.

My response: If I were to "impose" an "artificial" (knowlingly false and without merit) grand cosmic scheme upon myself it certainly would not resemble the set of beliefs I currently hold. On the contrary, I would create a religion based on the pursuit of pure worldy pleasure...kinda like the religion working today through popular American Culture.




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