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deviant conveniences (Free verse) by J.B. Manning

We had unprotected sex Knowing you’re infected Your cum-fungus blistered my flesh On contact Memories of you resonate in my mind Like water on windows Certainty fades like Daylight and looking back is easy…fore-site blinding Love is addictive and I’m broken I want to Tie your pubic hair in knots and hang you on your contemplation Every time You say goodbye.

zodiac 2-May-04/7:29 AM
Here, Joe-joe, I'll argue pleasure with you. This discussion is far enough down the rabbit-hole, anyway.

"Foolish as I may seem at times, I would dare not weigh my self down with a self-concocted system of beliefs that is at odds with my flesh and blood desires."

1. See "Shame" by Joe-joe.
2. See the following line: "Oh how much nicer it would be to live the life of a hedonist, giving into my every desire without giving thought to the eternal fate of my soul. "

Conclusions: You are as foolish as you seem.




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