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deviant conveniences (Free verse) by J.B. Manning

We had unprotected sex Knowing you’re infected Your cum-fungus blistered my flesh On contact Memories of you resonate in my mind Like water on windows Certainty fades like Daylight and looking back is easy…fore-site blinding Love is addictive and I’m broken I want to Tie your pubic hair in knots and hang you on your contemplation Every time You say goodbye.

Joe-joe 2-May-04/5:58 AM
What is a line break? I see nothing artificial about my "theory". Foolish as I may seem at times, I would dare not weigh my self down with a self-concocted system of beliefs that is at odds with my flesh and blood desires. Oh how much nicer it would be to live the life of a hedonist, giving into my every desire without giving thought to the eternal fate of my soul. You believe it is artificial because the spirit can not be seen through a microscope or captured in a test tube. That's fine with me. You say here that "the question is which theory better explains human nature". That was not my question it was yours. The piece I wrote was an expression of what it is I believe and what I've expereinced. There is no "question" and there is no "competition." But come on Darky admit it, there is a part of you that seeks for truth that is beyond your senses. I know the issue of God is one that you still wrestle with....admit it...it'll be our little secret.




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