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deviant conveniences (Free verse) by J.B. Manning

We had unprotected sex Knowing you’re infected Your cum-fungus blistered my flesh On contact Memories of you resonate in my mind Like water on windows Certainty fades like Daylight and looking back is easy…fore-site blinding Love is addictive and I’m broken I want to Tie your pubic hair in knots and hang you on your contemplation Every time You say goodbye.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1-May-04/5:21 PM
1. "I do think that we've all made life a whole lot more complicated and painful than it needs to be."

2. "A little more love, compassion, and charity would go a long long way towards making this world a better place to live in."

3. "We are in the mess we're in because we are ruled by the urges and desires of our ego and flesh and completely ignore our spirtitual nature."

I don't "disagree" with any of those. They're undisagreeable with, because they're wishy-washy platitudes with no verificiation or falsification conditions. No evidence or sensible thought process could lead you to believe them, nor could it lead you to disbelieve them.

Thanks!




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