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She Searches For Love (Other) by validus_vox

She walks the earth in search of truth With a few hopes in mind and a tune in her ears She sifts through people in search of gold Daily, it seems, someone new is breaking her hopes Bringing tears of pain… …and visions of escape from the haste Becoming a nomad, her roots seem to be lost Drifting through life …like a feather in the wind People come and go Leaving temporary memories But serving permanent scars This journey strengthens her mind And calluses her heart Maybe her mind isn’t naturally deficient But damaged by those who hurt her To her, I speak gently and calmly “This soul has good intentions… …let me see the real you” With a quirk little smirk she opens her arms With a tight hug she whispers in my ear… “Thank you for caring… …it is the best gift I have ever gotten” She steps back with such finesse And in her eye is a new glow One of a child getting a new toy In her step is a new spring And a heart refilled with hope

validus_vox 24-Apr-04/6:24 PM
and also...i think you are taking what i am trying to portray in the wrong manner. the story of the girl is based on a friend of mine, suffering from mental disorders that affect her greatly. i support when ever is needed and stay by her side through her suicidal tendencies to help stop her from doing something regretable.

now the story of the guy is about me. i feel my life is a waste, i shouldnt be here yet because i feel like no one understands me or what im trying to say. this is a perfect example, i think people take one thing i say and put it into a different context. im sorry you took it the way you did. at no time was i ever trying to portray the male as being stronger and the female. they support each other day in day out. i hope this explaination helps you understand better and never refer to me driving a fucking van, im not a soccer mom. nor am i a rapist or kidnapper, far from both. so please, dont take my words the wrong way, sorry for the confusion




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