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Dear Ms. Sexton (Lyric) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

It's Summer time at the funeral You're so divine supernatural I see you there but you don't see me I'll keep on hoping we were meant to be But, we went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew we went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew how to love Someone like me It's Autumn now at the carnival I follow you there instinctual That lemonade sure stang your lips As I stare, at your growing hips But, we went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew we went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew how to love A fool like me It's winter-time at the festival Ice sculptured rows of chilled denial You're skating on the pond, with your new Bo You're so in love that I turn and go I go crash, boom, bam I thought you knew I went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew I see through Your transperacy It's Spring at last in the hospital I paint all day 'habitual' I'm better now, and so high above The Doctors cut out all our love It went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew It went crash, boom, bam I wish you knew how to love Border-line.. Serenity......

evergreen 18-Aug-02/9:05 AM
i liked this, especially the 'spring' verse. that other guy used 'fuck' so many times in his uh, comment/tirade, nobody else has to for at least a week.




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