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Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed (Sestina) by zodiac

Do you hold words so dear that you hold words – so? Dear, that do. Hold words so dear that you do words that do hold you so, dear – so dear. That you hold – Do words, dear, that do you. Hold words so that. Do you? (hold words?) So, dear.

Shuushin 15-Apr-04/6:30 AM
you could glosa this and end up with a sestina - you might change the last or fourth lines so you don't have "dear" twice though.




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