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answers (Free verse) by francis nor capule

but i was always there even in your pain mayhaps your pride was too much to acknowledge my existence and love sometimes means letting go setting free giving space and being open do not make me go... how would you appreciate the things in life without me? every lover's moon without me; plain every love song without me would just be a song i am there always ,never have i left you i share your pain...

hypatia 9-Apr-04/12:21 PM
I like this one much better - less cliched. But it seems it is you, not he, who is proud when you say, how would you appreciate the things in life without me?" and "every love song without me would just be a song"




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